Sat Oct 23, 2004 11:25 pm
Sat Oct 23, 2004 11:56 pm
Sun Oct 24, 2004 12:44 am
Zero wrote:Colors don't match? *blinks* Uhhh... I think they match... The red matches his armor and the yellow matches his hair... Their bright so the image stands out more... *shrugs*
Sun Oct 24, 2004 1:32 am
Sun Oct 24, 2004 1:45 am
polarbearpop
You've made the details in the background scenery bright, which looks nice. The lady and the tramp text over the background doesn't look right...Maybe adjust it so all the same words aren't directly over one another. The main gont choice fits(seeing as it's a Disney movie.) The color of the av text and sig subtext doesn't match though. Also, in the av, you maybe should have edited it so just the one dog was visible.
Sun Oct 24, 2004 3:16 am
polarbearpop wrote:polarbearpop
You've made the details in the background scenery bright, which looks nice. The lady and the tramp text over the background doesn't look right...Maybe adjust it so all the same words aren't directly over one another. The main gont choice fits(seeing as it's a Disney movie.) The color of the av text and sig subtext doesn't match though. Also, in the av, you maybe should have edited it so just the one dog was visible.
Omgsh. That was the most informative (and well thought out) rating I've ever gotten, I think. I totally learned alot. The background text will definately be mixed up from now on. I didn't even think about it! And making the one pup in the av be the only pup visible would've worked much better, I will definately take that into consideration next time. The only thing I have to comment on (well I don't have to... but I will what the heck) If you are speaking of the av/sig subtext border not matching, It's a white stroke with lowered opacity. But I see that might not have worked out so well.
Thanks Flame
-kk[/i]
Sun Oct 24, 2004 3:47 am
Sun Oct 24, 2004 8:48 am
Sun Oct 24, 2004 10:49 am
Flame wrote:r4che1
This is a very different looking set due to it's size and the size of it's text. Get rid of the blue in the name. Give the set a pink border...The animation is also very nicely done. I'd maybe have scattered hearts here and there to fill some of the empty space though.
vkceankraz wrote:<b>Rachel</b> -- It's so cute! Good job with the matching colors. Almost exactly what I would have done ;P. The main text should have been moved downward, toward the center. Next time, try a pixel font or a shorter font, so that the bar isn't so thick. The gridlines are also a bit strong. Try lowering the opacity next time. The border is thick as well. If you use a double pixel border, try varying the shades of colors so that it doesn't look so bland.
Sun Oct 24, 2004 11:19 am
Ack! I'll explain. I meant that the subtext didn't match the rest of the set. (Though if you understood that, I can't figure out...) And no prob.
Sun Oct 24, 2004 5:05 pm
Flame wrote:Now THIS is a set where the large size is alright. This is one of the best you've done. First off, get rid of the blue animation. In the av, move her head down just a little bit. I don't have any major problems with the sig because it shows off the fanart well, but I'd choose a less jagged font. The drawings and overall look of the set is too, well, I guess you could say 'smooth' or 'soft' for the main font.
Koku wrote:One of the best sets I've seen from you. The background is actually filled, and even though the text is all the way at the bottom, there's something filling the top to look at. I'd suggest a light purple for animation, though. The dark blue stands out too much.
vkceanraz wrote:Much better than your past entries, in terms of filling up space. However, I still consider it a part of the background, and therefore your text should be placed differently. The font is bad choice; it's too thin and hard to read. Perhaps you should have given it a thicker stroke. Again, the uneven subtext.... You guys, pick a font that doesn't have letters randomly taller than other letters, or use all caps!
Sun Oct 24, 2004 5:52 pm
Sun Oct 24, 2004 6:04 pm
Well, I think the most you've done to this set is add text, as well as colorize it. But I think it was detailed enough that doing this was okay. I like the faint scanlines, as well as your font choice. Eh...but I almost think the colorization makes the girl and everything around her blend too much. It's hard to tell what everything is.
laq-Nice colorization, and I like the soft faded lines. Once again, I see no problems with this set. The only thing I'd personally change is move the av next to the lower left instead of the right.
Love the shade of pink/magenta you used. I normally don't like pink, but it's sexy. I'm sad that the score didn't show up on the final result though; it was really pretty on the original image. No matter, you did a fantastic job. It's gorgeous.
Sun Oct 24, 2004 7:47 pm
vkceankraz wrote:After posting my ratings and then reading Flames, I've just realized we said a lot of the opposite things... so I feel bad for the contestants, getting conflicting advice, haha.
Note to entrants: remember that the judges are using their personal preferences sometimes, and therefore ratings will be different. Based on what you read, just use <i>your</i> best judgment when making graphics.
r4che1 wrote:Thanks for such insightful ratings, on my set and on everyone elsesFlame wrote:r4che1
This is a very different looking set due to it's size and the size of it's text. Get rid of the blue in the name. Give the set a pink border...The animation is also very nicely done. I'd maybe have scattered hearts here and there to fill some of the empty space though.
What do you mean by its size? I deliberately made the text larger, as when i was looking through other entries i found it quite hard to read some of the subtexts as they were so small, but that might just be me.
I did actually experiment with a pink border, but i couldnt quite work out which shade to use that didnt just blend in with the image totally and make it all look too pink. I like the scattered hearts idea though...
Sun Oct 24, 2004 10:39 pm
Flame wrote:r4che1 wrote:What do you mean by its size? I deliberately made the text larger, as when i was looking through other entries i found it quite hard to read some of the subtexts as they were so small, but that might just be me.
I did actually experiment with a pink border, but i couldnt quite work out which shade to use that didnt just blend in with the image totally and make it all look too pink. I like the scattered hearts idea though...
I meant that most sets people make are not as big as yours, thats all.
flame wrote:I'm also very surprised at how many people are commenting on their ratings this time... O.o We never get this many.